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STiGuy06 · 05-19-2010, 02:02 PM

Ryan had asked me to design a shirt for him. He wanted the logo across the chest and a nutritional label across the back w/ something to do w/ the shop or Subies. I came up with this. I need to know if you, the customer/supporter, would buy this. Give Ryan and I feedback!

FRONT:

BACK

Subie_sleeper · 05-19-2010, 02:14 PM

I want one!
& a HOODIE!

STiGuy06 · 05-19-2010, 02:21 PM

Haha! Well that started off good i guess...

**Ender81** · 05-19-2010, 02:53 PM

No pics and you could put the Area1320 logo on a pink g-string and Rob would want it lol

STiGuy06 · 05-19-2010, 03:04 PM

hahahaha!

grimm · 05-19-2010, 03:10 PM

i like the idea but i'm not that intrigued by the info in the nutritional label. i think that could be more creative.

STiGuy06 · 05-19-2010, 03:31 PM

I thought about pricing of services but they have wayyyyyyyyyy too many to fit on there. Plus pricing might change over the years.

**Ender81** · 05-19-2010, 03:37 PM

it's weird the pictures still don't work for me on my laptop but I can see them on my Iphone.

I agree with Grimm it's a good idea but a lot more could be done with it. Also the copy under the guys names doesn't seem right. Although the thought of seeing Ryan wear a shirt that says %Daily Fun on the back is just....well it's just great lol. So are they all equal at 25% each or are Ryan and Drake each 30 with Zack and Asian Mike at 20?

grimm · 05-19-2010, 03:38 PM

i like that is is car spec related, but i guess some of it just doesn't appeal to me. ie firing order... i might also total up the daily fun at the bottom. Love the idea and the layout, I just think it needs a little more thought on the nutritional goodness.

Great job!

DPancoast · 05-19-2010, 03:50 PM

the percentages are a little silly... but I guess I could go either way on it. I'd wear it

rodknock02 · 05-19-2010, 04:00 PM

hmmm cant view pics for some reason?

11secdsm · 05-19-2010, 04:01 PM

I dig it!

STiGuy06 · 05-19-2010, 04:16 PM

Ryan just pm'd me about it. We need to figure out something else instead of their names.

twizhimself · 05-19-2010, 04:28 PM

id dump the copy behind the nutritional facts labe and the boxer photo..then dump the vertical grayed out logo and i think youll have it - design wise...as for content..hmm...

**Ender81** · 05-19-2010, 04:43 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by twizhimself

id dump the copy behind the nutritional facts labe and the boxer photo..then dump the vertical grayed out logo and i think youll have it - design wise...as for content..hmm...

Pretty straightforward.

With the logo on the front have you thought about making it a bit smaller and offsetting it a bit?

twizhimself · 05-19-2010, 05:08 PM

naa i think the logo would look pretty cool centered in the chest area about 10-12" in width. (sort of standard)

STiGuy06 · 05-19-2010, 05:12 PM

I dunno about dumping the logo on the back...the other stuff sure. It would just look too plain w/o everything but the label.

STiGuy06 · 05-19-2010, 05:20 PM

Took some of the advice....I admit, it looks cleaner haha

STiGuy06 · 05-19-2010, 05:22 PM

Anyone think the color logo on the front would look cheesy and played out if i did it sideways (like the back one) across the whole 1 side?

CobaltSSChick · 05-19-2010, 05:38 PM

hmmmmm try it so we can see a comparison...still not sure what I think about the back...either way, if you get these done before Wicked Big Meet I'd buy 1 for the bf, I'd buy one for myself too if you made ladies tank tops, not a tshirt fan ;)

05-19-2010, 02:02 PM	#1
STiGuy06 Tri-State Addict Join Date: Oct 2009 Member #14844 iTrader: (0)	Area1320 Shirt Design - Comments please! Ryan had asked me to design a shirt for him. He wanted the logo across the chest and a nutritional label across the back w/ something to do w/ the shop or Subies. I came up with this. I need to know if you, the customer/supporter, would buy this. Give Ryan and I feedback! FRONT: BACK __________________ *Josh Story Design*

05-19-2010, 02:14 PM	#2
Subie_sleeper Tri-State Post Whore Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: Center Valley Pa. Member #5775 My Ride: '06 Subaru Baja Turbo. Cash consuming vortex from HELL iTrader: (1)	Area1320 Shirt Design - Comments please! I want one! & a HOODIE! __________________ Time to concentrate on the damn leaky axle & gettin my exhaust straightened. To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 signatures.

05-19-2010, 02:21 PM	#3
STiGuy06 Tri-State Addict Join Date: Oct 2009 Member #14844 iTrader: (0)	Haha! Well that started off good i guess... __________________ *Josh Story Design*

05-19-2010, 03:04 PM	#5
STiGuy06 Tri-State Addict Join Date: Oct 2009 Member #14844 iTrader: (0)	hahahaha! __________________ *Josh Story Design*

05-19-2010, 03:10 PM	#6
grimm Tri-State Post Whore Join Date: Dec 2006 Member #3058 iTrader: (2)	i like the idea but i'm not that intrigued by the info in the nutritional label. i think that could be more creative. __________________ To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 signatures.

05-19-2010, 03:31 PM	#7
STiGuy06 Tri-State Addict Join Date: Oct 2009 Member #14844 iTrader: (0)	I thought about pricing of services but they have wayyyyyyyyyy too many to fit on there. Plus pricing might change over the years. __________________ *Josh Story Design*

05-19-2010, 03:38 PM	#9
grimm Tri-State Post Whore Join Date: Dec 2006 Member #3058 iTrader: (2)	i like that is is car spec related, but i guess some of it just doesn't appeal to me. ie firing order... i might also total up the daily fun at the bottom. Love the idea and the layout, I just think it needs a little more thought on the nutritional goodness. Great job! __________________ To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 signatures.

05-19-2010, 04:00 PM	#11
rodknock02 Tri-State Aficionado Join Date: Aug 2007 Location: EASTON Member #5523 My Ride: R.I.P 02 wrx wrb 20g'd ,6mt 376hp/402tq iTrader: (1)	hmmm cant view pics for some reason? __________________ R.I.P To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 signatures. next one will be 6700 rpms launch baha!

05-19-2010, 04:01 PM	#12
11secdsm Tri-State Post Whore Join Date: May 2007 Location: Warrington, PA Member #4914 My Ride: '15 F150, '11 535xi, '95 M3, '04 Wrangler iTrader: (2)	I dig it! __________________ -Chris 1995 M3 LS6 swapped 1991 Eclipse auto- 725whp - 5.93@122 1/8 \|\| 9.14 @ 151 2006 Evo IX- 609whp-> (2.3L) \|\| 11.19 @ 128 ->(stock 2.0) SOLD 1997 Supra- 670whp- 10.91 @ 139 SOLD

05-19-2010, 04:16 PM	#13
STiGuy06 Tri-State Addict Join Date: Oct 2009 Member #14844 iTrader: (0)	Ryan just pm'd me about it. We need to figure out something else instead of their names. __________________ *Josh Story Design*

05-19-2010, 04:28 PM	#14
twizhimself Tri-State Addict Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: Easton, PA Member #950 My Ride: 2004 Subaru WRX iTrader: (0)	id dump the copy behind the nutritional facts labe and the boxer photo..then dump the vertical grayed out logo and i think youll have it - design wise...as for content..hmm... __________________ To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 signatures. To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 signatures. To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 signatures. Last edited by twizhimself; 05-19-2010 at 04:35 PM.

05-19-2010, 05:08 PM	#16
twizhimself Tri-State Addict Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: Easton, PA Member #950 My Ride: 2004 Subaru WRX iTrader: (0)	naa i think the logo would look pretty cool centered in the chest area about 10-12" in width. (sort of standard) __________________ To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 signatures. To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 signatures. To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 signatures.

05-19-2010, 05:12 PM	#17
STiGuy06 Tri-State Addict Join Date: Oct 2009 Member #14844 iTrader: (0)	I dunno about dumping the logo on the back...the other stuff sure. It would just look too plain w/o everything but the label. __________________ *Josh Story Design*

05-19-2010, 05:20 PM	#18
STiGuy06 Tri-State Addict Join Date: Oct 2009 Member #14844 iTrader: (0)	Took some of the advice....I admit, it looks cleaner haha __________________ *Josh Story Design*

05-19-2010, 05:22 PM	#19
STiGuy06 Tri-State Addict Join Date: Oct 2009 Member #14844 iTrader: (0)	Anyone think the color logo on the front would look cheesy and played out if i did it sideways (like the back one) across the whole 1 side? __________________ *Josh Story Design*

05-19-2010, 05:38 PM	#20
CobaltSSChick Tri-State Addict Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: Kutztown, PA Member #7048 My Ride: 2004 Subaru STi iTrader: (0)	hmmmmm try it so we can see a comparison...still not sure what I think about the back...either way, if you get these done before Wicked Big Meet I'd buy 1 for the bf, I'd buy one for myself too if you made ladies tank tops, not a tshirt fan ;)

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