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ourbloodykisses · 01-31-2010, 05:36 PM

I want some critics to tell me what you like and don't. whats too edited and what looks like trash. also, give me some pointers if you can? idk just anything.

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thanks guys.

Khellen · 02-01-2010, 12:35 AM

The only shot that really stand out to me is number 5. Really nice shot. I really could see myself liking number 3 if it was an HDR shot and all of the details of the innerworkings of the pump stood out more. The other photos feel like they have way to much going on in the photos or an uninteresting subject. I'm no photography expert, just my personal feelings.

Fujito · 02-01-2010, 12:53 AM

Yeah, 3 and 5 are interesting. 4 is alright. The rest are just boring subjects.

97MaximaSE · 02-01-2010, 01:24 AM

I think the most interesting one is number 3. although, some/more editing will make it a lot more interesting. make it centered and even, also play with contrast and light to bring out more of it's parts. it looks like the sun was on the back left of it, maybe return when the lighting is better to help with the exposure.
i also wish it wasn't cut off towards the bottom, including all of it would've helped i think.

i like number 5 a lot too.

ourbloodykisses · 02-03-2010, 06:27 PM

thanks guys! anyone else..

agencyone0one · 02-03-2010, 06:33 PM

I personally dig number 4, for some reason it gives me a Office Space vibe (must be that coffee cup in the background) lol. I'd like it more if the lighting was consistent over the whole subject though. I don't like how the upper left corner of the Polaroid camera has a yellowish hue to it. Number 3 is a really cool subject, and like everyone else I really like number 5.

01-31-2010, 05:36 PM	#1
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02-03-2010, 06:27 PM	#5
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02-03-2010, 06:33 PM	#6
agencyone0one Tri-State Aficionado Join Date: Jan 2010 Location: Sussex/Rutgers Member #15440 My Ride: 96 Talon Tsi, 04' DRZ 400 SM: SOLD, 04' Sv 650: Sold :( iTrader: (1)	I personally dig number 4, for some reason it gives me a Office Space vibe (must be that coffee cup in the background) lol. I'd like it more if the lighting was consistent over the whole subject though. I don't like how the upper left corner of the Polaroid camera has a yellowish hue to it. Number 3 is a really cool subject, and like everyone else I really like number 5. __________________ My anti-theft system: ACT 2600

02-01-2010, 12:35 AM	#2
Khellen Tri-State Post Whore Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: Saylorsburg, PA Member #5720 My Ride: 05 STi 30R Brotated 400awhp iTrader: (7)	The only shot that really stand out to me is number 5. Really nice shot. I really could see myself liking number 3 if it was an HDR shot and all of the details of the innerworkings of the pump stood out more. The other photos feel like they have way to much going on in the photos or an uninteresting subject. I'm no photography expert, just my personal feelings.

02-01-2010, 12:53 AM	#3
Fujito Tri-State Post Whore Join Date: Dec 2008 Member #10571 My Ride: Toyota Celica iTrader: (0)	Yeah, 3 and 5 are interesting. 4 is alright. The rest are just boring subjects.

02-01-2010, 01:24 AM	#4
97MaximaSE Tri-State Aficionado Join Date: May 2007 Location: West Chester Member #4583 My Ride: 1991 BMW 318i iTrader: (0)	I think the most interesting one is number 3. although, some/more editing will make it a lot more interesting. make it centered and even, also play with contrast and light to bring out more of it's parts. it looks like the sun was on the back left of it, maybe return when the lighting is better to help with the exposure. i also wish it wasn't cut off towards the bottom, including all of it would've helped i think. i like number 5 a lot too.