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Fabian · 02-10-2012, 07:08 PM

so this was pretty much my first time working with more than just one speedlight. Im enjoying how they came out. I feel like I've stepped my game up a little.

_DSC1748b-Edit-Edit by Fabination, on Flickr

_DSC1729b (2) by Fabination, on Flickr

_DSC1888b by Fabination, on Flickr

_DSC1810b by Fabination, on Flickr

empera · 02-10-2012, 07:12 PM

great pics and finally a good looking model.

NowThatsG · 02-10-2012, 08:47 PM

can definitely tell it was you first time and the only "awesome" part about the post, is that you can admit you stepped your game up "a little".

like you mentioned in tonk's thread: if i we you, id learn to edit.

lownslow95 · 02-10-2012, 09:15 PM

Pics look good. Might want to edit your thread title and put NSFW.

tristatesentra · 02-11-2012, 04:18 PM

chicks hott and good job dude

Fabian · 02-12-2012, 09:24 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by NowThatsG

can definitely tell it was you first time and the only "awesome" part about the post, is that you can admit you stepped your game up "a little".

like you mentioned in tonk's thread: if i we you, id learn to edit.

maybe you'd like to iterate a little bit on what you mean?? A little constructive criticism maybe?

BlkWhtTSI · 02-13-2012, 09:31 AM

I like! Great posing, shot composition is nice too. 1804b is nice too, you should of posted that one on here as well!

Only things i could mention, in the first 2 the blown out whites are distracting. Was it dark out when you took these? It looks dark through the windows but yet she looks to be lit by sunlight in the first 3. Not sure what you could of done about that... besides shooting while it was day time. Why no horizontal shots? Would of liked to see a horizontal of her on the window sill full body.

Fabian · 02-14-2012, 11:03 AM

Thanks man i do have some horizontal shots but not edited yet. Ill postem later on. Yea it was dark out and with her schedule i couldnt get any daylight. I was trying to do the whole overwxposed feel. Like i said, my first time with more than one speedlight

Rado_VR6 · 02-14-2012, 11:26 AM

I'd give her the "bidness," kneegrow style!

Oh and good pics

04BlueSRT4 · 02-14-2012, 12:26 PM

I actually like the pose and lighting on the first one. Although the light next to her head is a bit distracting overall I like it.
I think that the third one has the best lighting and pose

Fabian · 02-14-2012, 12:48 PM

thanks guys. Like I said it was my first time using more than one strobe. and it was night time which added to the difficulty. But I learned alot with this shoot.

KurtyIce · 02-15-2012, 12:48 PM

this thread pleases me very much so.

Fabian · 02-23-2012, 02:29 PM

thanks Kurty! Glad you like!

02-10-2012, 07:08 PM	#1
Fabian Tri-State Aficionado Join Date: Jul 2008 Location: Lancaster PA Member #8246 My Ride: 1995 Talon TSI iTrader: (0)	Girl + lights=awesome so this was pretty much my first time working with more than just one speedlight. Im enjoying how they came out. I feel like I've stepped my game up a little. _DSC1748b-Edit-Edit by Fabination, on Flickr _DSC1729b (2) by Fabination, on Flickr _DSC1888b by Fabination, on Flickr _DSC1810b by Fabination, on Flickr __________________ To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 signatures.

02-14-2012, 11:03 AM	#8
Fabian Tri-State Aficionado Join Date: Jul 2008 Location: Lancaster PA Member #8246 My Ride: 1995 Talon TSI iTrader: (0)	Thanks man i do have some horizontal shots but not edited yet. Ill postem later on. Yea it was dark out and with her schedule i couldnt get any daylight. I was trying to do the whole overwxposed feel. Like i said, my first time with more than one speedlight __________________ To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 signatures.

02-14-2012, 12:26 PM	#10
04BlueSRT4 Tri-State Post Whore Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: R'Lyeh Member #1543 My Ride: Figure It Out iTrader: (0)	I actually like the pose and lighting on the first one. Although the light next to her head is a bit distracting overall I like it. I think that the third one has the best lighting and pose __________________ Sent From My Computer Using A Keyboard To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 signatures.

02-14-2012, 12:48 PM	#11
Fabian Tri-State Aficionado Join Date: Jul 2008 Location: Lancaster PA Member #8246 My Ride: 1995 Talon TSI iTrader: (0)	thanks guys. Like I said it was my first time using more than one strobe. and it was night time which added to the difficulty. But I learned alot with this shoot. __________________ To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 signatures.

02-23-2012, 02:29 PM	#13
Fabian Tri-State Aficionado Join Date: Jul 2008 Location: Lancaster PA Member #8246 My Ride: 1995 Talon TSI iTrader: (0)	thanks Kurty! Glad you like! __________________ To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 signatures.

02-10-2012, 07:12 PM	#2
empera Tri-State Post Whore Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: Philly. Member #3674 My Ride: 67.5 Roadster, 00 Outback, 93.5 Supra tt, 88 Shiro, Tundra, turbo sc300 iTrader: (5)	great pics and finally a good looking model.

02-10-2012, 08:47 PM	#3
NowThatsG Tri-State Addict Join Date: Sep 2009 Location: Pa Member #14614 My Ride: '12 Corbin Sparrow iTrader: (0)	can definitely tell it was you first time and the only "awesome" part about the post, is that you can admit you stepped your game up "a little". like you mentioned in tonk's thread: if i we you, id learn to edit.

02-13-2012, 09:31 AM	#7
BlkWhtTSI Tri-State Post Whore Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: Norristown, PA Member #7329 My Ride: 1991 Eagle Talon TSi AWD, '701/2 Camaro RS, '85 Mustang GT iTrader: (1)	I like! Great posing, shot composition is nice too. 1804b is nice too, you should of posted that one on here as well! Only things i could mention, in the first 2 the blown out whites are distracting. Was it dark out when you took these? It looks dark through the windows but yet she looks to be lit by sunlight in the first 3. Not sure what you could of done about that... besides shooting while it was day time. Why no horizontal shots? Would of liked to see a horizontal of her on the window sill full body.

02-14-2012, 11:26 AM	#9
Rado_VR6 Tri-State Aficionado Join Date: Aug 2010 Location: Dat PA Member #17048 My Ride: .:R32 #3006 iTrader: (0)	I'd give her the "bidness," kneegrow style! Oh and good pics

02-15-2012, 12:48 PM	#12
KurtyIce Tri-State Training Wheels Join Date: Oct 2010 Location: Philadelphia Member #17850 My Ride: 2002 Honda Civic LX iTrader: (0)	this thread pleases me very much so.

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