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Scapegoat · 02-24-2009, 05:33 PM

Nick, whatever works. In your case, pictures of clean cars works more than a better layout

Oakes · 02-24-2009, 05:34 PM

thank you

LilSubiedrvr · 02-24-2009, 05:34 PM

Ok. It's clean which is a good thing. People usually clutter web sites up.

- Get rid of the scripty font for your tagline.
- Make sure your type in your box isn't touching the box lines, move it in about .25 inch on each side.
- Use your contact page for your phone number, etc only-it's tacky to put it on the header.
- Overall less copy.

Try that

Scapegoat · 02-24-2009, 05:40 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by LilSubiedrvr

Ok. It's clean which is a good thing. People usually clutter web sites up.

- Get rid of the scripty font for your tagline.
- Make sure your type in your box isn't touching the box lines, move it in about .25 inch on each side.
- Use your contact page for your phone number, etc only-it's tacky to put it on the header.
- Overall less copy.

Try that

i trust you don't know anything about this subject...

1) the font is fine, lose the "..."
2) remove the border itself... its tacky, if you must keep it... you'll need to add a left and right margin to the inside <p> tags, if you are able to
3) not really
4) wtf are you stupid? more copy... you can't go wrong with copy as long as it is representative of the website. proper information, correctly spelled, and full of juicy keywords that describe your business...

less copy... more images? no...

more copy more copy more copy. more copy = better search results b/c that is what the likes of google and yahoo look at when scoring a site.

**Ender81** · 02-24-2009, 08:06 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Scapegoat

i trust you don't know anything about this subject...

ROFLMAO kinda wrong man she has a bachelors degree in creative design and works as an Art Director for a mutli million dollar ad agency. You?

Oakes · 02-24-2009, 09:08 PM

Hey Ender, did you get my PM btw?

DPancoast · 02-24-2009, 10:21 PM

nick, when my car is done, you can do it and put it on your site k?

**Ender81** · 02-25-2009, 01:19 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Oakes

Hey Ender, did you get my PM btw?

I did but the sites been down ever since lol. I am definitely interested but I am going to have to wait for me to get a new job. But thanks again I am dying to see the bug get a little protection and a nice shiny exterior lol.

Oakes · 02-25-2009, 02:07 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Ender81

I did but the sites been down ever since lol. I am definitely interested but I am going to have to wait for me to get a new job. But thanks again I am dying to see the bug get a little protection and a nice shiny exterior lol.

Sweet, that's why I wanted to make sure with the site being up and down lately. Sounds good man!

Quote:

Originally Posted by DPancoast

nick, when my car is done, you can do it and put it on your site k?

k

slanguage · 02-26-2009, 07:05 PM

checked out your site today. cool beans.

Oakes · 08-22-2009, 12:17 PM

The website has been completely re-done by Grimm on here, check it out!

www.oakesdetail.com

OMGz Turbo · 08-22-2009, 12:26 PM

i really like it nice job grimm

BlackBulletTSi · 08-22-2009, 12:50 PM

looks pretty good brotha might be stopping up with the GSX when I get it back after I clean out all the junk.

Oakes · 08-22-2009, 01:01 PM

Thanks guys! Well....direct that thanks to Grimm haha. Speakin of which, he's gotta drop off his car!

BlackBullet - Go for it! Gotta take care of that notorious Mitsu paint

02-24-2009, 05:34 PM	#122
Oakes Tri-State Post Whore Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: West Chester Member #4384 My Ride: 2010 Mercedes Benz E63 AMG iTrader: (0)	thank you __________________ Team Oakes: I dont give a ****!

02-24-2009, 09:08 PM	#126
Oakes Tri-State Post Whore Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: West Chester Member #4384 My Ride: 2010 Mercedes Benz E63 AMG iTrader: (0)	Hey Ender, did you get my PM btw? __________________ Team Oakes: I dont give a ****!

02-26-2009, 07:05 PM	#130
slanguage Tri-State Training Wheels Join Date: May 2008 Location: Philadelphia Member #7708 My Ride: 2005 Hyundai Tucson GLS 4WD Obsidian Black iTrader: (0)	checked out your site today. cool beans. __________________ A car isn't clean unless it's been detailed.

08-22-2009, 12:17 PM	#131
Oakes Tri-State Post Whore Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: West Chester Member #4384 My Ride: 2010 Mercedes Benz E63 AMG iTrader: (0)	The website has been completely re-done by Grimm on here, check it out! www.oakesdetail.com __________________ Team Oakes: I dont give a ****!

08-22-2009, 12:26 PM	#132
OMGz Turbo Tri-State Post Whore Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Ltown Member #3108 My Ride: 01' WS6..That whistles...01' Explorer 5.slow iTrader: (0)	i really like it nice job grimm __________________ loading HATERS.....99% ████████████████] NO ONE CARES ABOUT BEING TTT APPROVED

02-24-2009, 05:33 PM	#121
Scapegoat TST Ruined My Life! Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: stop looking at my gold Member #1208 iTrader: (1)	Nick, whatever works. In your case, pictures of clean cars works more than a better layout

02-24-2009, 05:34 PM	#123
LilSubiedrvr Tri-State Addict Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: PA Member #5777 My Ride: '01 Subaru 2.5 RS iTrader: (0)	Ok. It's clean which is a good thing. People usually clutter web sites up. - Get rid of the scripty font for your tagline. - Make sure your type in your box isn't touching the box lines, move it in about .25 inch on each side. - Use your contact page for your phone number, etc only-it's tacky to put it on the header. - Overall less copy. Try that

08-22-2009, 12:50 PM	#133
BlackBulletTSi Tri-State Post Whore Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: L~Town Member #224 My Ride: 99 Eclipse GSX iTrader: (3)	looks pretty good brotha might be stopping up with the GSX when I get it back after I clean out all the junk. __________________ Check my music out at To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 signatures. Recently joined record label Strike Division, new tracks to come soon. New DJ community being built, To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 signatures. COMING SOON!!

08-22-2009, 01:01 PM	#134
Oakes Tri-State Post Whore Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: West Chester Member #4384 My Ride: 2010 Mercedes Benz E63 AMG iTrader: (0)	Thanks guys! Well....direct that thanks to Grimm haha. Speakin of which, he's gotta drop off his car! BlackBullet - Go for it! Gotta take care of that notorious Mitsu paint __________________ Team Oakes: I dont give a ****!

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