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[CleanNeon98]

OK so our teacher told us to write a paragraph by monday desrcibing a place of importance and happiness to us..sort of a small oasis, or perhaps a place we didnt like much, so I did mine on freshworks (a bit exxagerated to make it more interesting and acceptable to her standards)..

Here were the rules

Paragraph must be in 3rd person view
Must be at least 250 words
Rough draft

this is due monday...any hints or corrections I can work on would be apretiated



The Thursday night hotspot is none other than the TriState Tuners meets at freshworks. Coming every week, and seeing nearly 100 custom cars in a single locale from all over the east coast is really something that cannot be fully appreciated until it is seen in person. There are people from different racial groups, different clubs, and with different cars and bikes, all gathered in the same location for a single reason; to communicate their lifestyle to the public. There are always the same designated sections for American Muscle, Import tuner, Bikes, Trucks, and luxury as well as some high-end exotics, and while these sections house almost the same vehicles every week, there is never a dull moment. Hearing the Evolution group bounce their limiters, and the ever so gentle sound of turbochargers is nothing short of amazing. One can almost feel in the presence of racecars. Walking from section to section, almost all 400 visitors from the local area can find something to appreciate, and someone to communicate with about a similar interest or even share a story. One can never be short of stunned by the owners of the cars present opening their doors, and hearts to the public, allowing almost anyone to sit in the drivers seat, see under the hood, and share a similar setup. Every week, the lines of scorched tire get longer and wider, and the aroma of burning rubber gets deep to the senses, that taste buds are awoken. Leaving the show, its definitely common to see a few races happening on long un-populated roads, and while the winner gets no prize, monetary or stationary, the winner gets to be proud of the money and time went into the vehicle. The show itself is nothing short of a Fast & Furious film, and cannot be fully experienced until it is participated in.