Quote:
Originally Posted by Vypurr
I don't like how the entire bike is totally in focus. I think you should pick a section or object (headlight) and focus on that while the rear is slightly out of focus.
|
I disagree. I hate when one part of a car is in focus and the other isn't, unless it's a detail shot. Maybe stopping down another half stop would better separate the background though. Blurred background with the car totally in focus is what's up.
The bike looks good in these Barry. I never like when there are two shadows in different directions, but conditions weren't ideal for you. #1 is my favorite in terms of composition. I think if you softened the flash on #3 (or filled from back right) it would've worked nicely. Good to see something different from two flashes at 45*.
And the bike is awesome.