Good write up, but hopefully we will be able to actually talk to him.
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We held a meet there Tuesday 10/30, and had about 50 cars or so and was left alone for about an hour, until some guy drove by and did a burnout, who might I add was not part of the meet, or associated with any of Tristatetuners.
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I would change that to
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On Tuesday, 10/30, we held a meet between the McDolands and AMC. We were all well behaved until a driver that was not associated with us did a burnout in a different lot. When he pulled up, we promptly asked him to leave, and we let him know that behavior like that will get us kicked out.
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I just thought the big sentence sounded awkward.