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Originally Posted by FijiBlueFG
Some shots in my makeshift studio....
for all you pros on here, I'm really getting into this strobist/studio stuff, pleases help em out with some criticism
Comparison by Ty-Hankins, on Flickr
Colleen by Ty-Hankins, on Flickr
general set up if anyone cares...
SetUp Shot by Ty-Hankins, on Flickr |
For the first image, I don't think the rim light is necessary. I wouldn't have used it unless I desired to separate the subject from the background. Then I would've used a wider lens and lessened the power on the flash.
Second image is a bit blow out on the right. Besides that, it's a great image. The third one is great as well. Nothing else I can see. The other stuff such as posing and chiaroscuro you will pick up as you develop your style. So far so good.