Thanks for all the comments everyone, good and bad. The bad ones help me keep learning/improving so bring it on
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Originally Posted by YellowMSP
all the pics don't have any real pop/look flat for the most part too
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Yeah unfortunately it was overcast and it seemed like my camera just wasn't cooperating with me to make the pics anything outstanding.
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Originally Posted by jspek
i agree with you tonk, these shots do nothing for the model besides making her look like a ho. can you voice your ideas during the shoot at all? it seems like this client has absolutely no idea how to pick a location, outfits etc.
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I have, but he wants them for the model section of his website and he thinks the slutty pictures are what grabs people's attention. His site is all about money, investing, real estate, etc so I don't know what type of clientelle he's trying to attract with these slutty pictures... but that's not really for me to decide.
The last set he posted taken at Hyperfest were absolutely terrible though. He obviously knows nothing about photography so it's not even worth the money for me anymore. I'm done with this guy.
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Originally Posted by cszakolczai
I don't know if you want criticism but if you do, then read below, if not then just ignore my post...
#1 there is a pole growing out of her head, not great composition.
#2 looks out of focus and the steering wheel is upside down, looks kinda odd
#3 her face is out of focus completely
#4 looks like the focus was on the car because she is out of focus again
#5 actually looks like the best shot of the group
I just see no pop. I've seen you take much better pictures.
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1 - She's leaning against the pole, I don't see it as growing out of her head but I guess I can see what you mean.
About the OOF pictures...I need to adjust where my camera focuses because it looks like for most of them the camera focuses on the car, not the girl. I would figure that on a camera this expensive it would figure out the focus with no problem haha.