NYC wide angled C&C recent work
 

went to nyc this past weekend and showed my cousins from cali around the big apple. these are mostly in the one thread but figured id show them on their own and see if i could recieve some C&C


enjoy
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http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3109/...24781571_o.jpg
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http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3226/...3a984b64_o.jpg
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http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3037/...200837c3_o.jpg
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http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3107/...ca0be0fc_o.jpg

5 1-exp HDR and masking work in cs3
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3262/...99bd72f5_b.jpg
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http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3054/...ae20194d_o.jpg
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http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3193/...5becc020_o.jpg
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http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2365/...0abcf40c_o.jpg
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http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3249/...8f5fa025_o.jpg
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http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3154/...3d502dab_o.jpg

love the processing on that first one

I really like these shots for the most part.
#1, 3, and 5 are my favs

to be ultra critical:
#4 the focus seems slightly off the front of the starbucks cup.
#7 not super clear and i'd be interested in seeing it with some warmth. (not that it's bad, just interested) the re-size may have lost the clarity)
#10 crop the bottom off slightly to remove plaque on the left and the yellow ribbon center

don't take my criticism the wrong way, they are excellent photos.

cute criffy

not at all grimm i totally accept the C&C i kinda notice #4 now a bit maybe because of the ultra wide shooting only at i think f8 maybe should bumped it higher to like f12 or f14?

thanks for the C&C tho next i want to move onto more flash photography i still suck at it though. :cry:

that first pic is hot. im surprised pearl didnt try to steal the road bike out of the picture. lolz

The stripes and condensation on the left side of the cup seem to be clearer then the front. It just looks like the focus moved on ya, maybe it's just me?

lul i has a bettar one
muhahahaha

awesome photos, i really miss that skyline without the wtc towers. Dunno how well you know the area, but my family used to have an apartment on Broad and Wall street in "The Exchange." I gotta get back up there soon.