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S4toSTI
04-08-2007, 08:51 PM
I like this one continuing to mess with some different elements of composure.
http://images23.fotki.com/v765/photos/7/737446/4731868/BJS_3912-vi.jpg

namdoogwerdna
04-08-2007, 08:58 PM
looks good B. I personally would try to put more negative space in the bottom left, because it seems a little too centered on that diagonal. (the whole cutting across to make 2 different sections of the picture annoys me, i only mentioned that because you were playing with composure)

now you just have to admit that your real hobby is growing pretty plants.

grimm
04-09-2007, 10:17 AM
http://i128.photobucket.com/albums/p174/grimm5577/BJS_3912-vi.jpg
this is something i played with. I feel that sometimes cropping it drastically gives the photos more draw. I also played with soe levels to try and get some of the details back in the white pedals, they seem a bit blown out, You might want to try creating 2 layers and doing different post processing to each, then merging them, or edit the curves per channel. to get the colors you want, then bump the exposure up or down. I also then sometimes edit using selective color, and pop the ones i want.

S4toSTI
04-09-2007, 10:20 AM
Yeah i like the open space in my crop but i see what you are saying in yours.

grimm
04-09-2007, 10:30 AM
another idea, is to crowd the right side a bit more, and create more space to the left? it'll give it just a slightly off balance feel, which can be a nice composition as well.

S4toSTI
04-09-2007, 08:06 PM
I like that idea too. Open space is cool.